I like the colors on the black background. I think perhaps another vibrant color or two would help. Or at least get rid pf the white text that dominates the bottom third. For a rough draft this is okay. I wouldn't print even one copy of this though, as it sits.
If you want to be taken seriously, you need to stop using mspaint or whatever the fuck and at least step up to Photoshop. Or get someone else to do it for you. I have read on Joshua's shit pit of a website that
@Gargamel is competent in some ancient version of Creative Suite. Maybe if you fling some gold his way he'd make you something presentable. Kikes and gold are like niggers and crack, after all.